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Title: Let's make a story
Post by: kookoo on July 07, 2008, 08:34:54 PM
 ;D This is totally not spam to get more posts to become a golden dragon.   ;)

Ok, I'll begin.  Everyone is allowed to write one sentence and let's see what we get.

"It began in the mountains on an overcast day, where only one ray of sunshine broke through the clouds.
Title: Re: Let's make a story
Post by: QSW on July 07, 2008, 09:41:33 PM
Quote from: kookoo on July 07, 2008, 08:34:54 PM


Ok, I'll begin.  Everyone is allowed to write one sentence and let's see what we get.

"It began in the mountains on an overcast day, where only one ray of sunshine broke through the clouds.

It shone like the light of Heaven as it bounced off what appeared to be, a crystal dome buried in the rock floor.
Title: Re: Let's make a story
Post by: Tybae on July 07, 2008, 09:57:52 PM
Quote from: QSW on July 07, 2008, 09:41:33 PM
Quote from: kookoo on July 07, 2008, 08:34:54 PM


Ok, I'll begin.  Everyone is allowed to write one sentence and let's see what we get.

"It began in the mountains on an overcast day, where only one ray of sunshine broke through the clouds.

It shone like the light of Heaven as it bounced off what appeared to be, a crystal dome buried in the rock floor.

In the shadows lies the keeper of the crystal.  Sword unsheathed nostrils aflare. 
Title: Re: Let's make a story
Post by: Estelindis on July 08, 2008, 03:06:10 AM
Quote from: Tybae on July 07, 2008, 09:57:52 PM
Quote from: QSW on July 07, 2008, 09:41:33 PM
Quote from: kookoo on July 07, 2008, 08:34:54 PM


Ok, I'll begin.  Everyone is allowed to write one sentence and let's see what we get.

"It began in the mountains on an overcast day, where only one ray of sunshine broke through the clouds.

It shone like the light of Heaven as it bounced off what appeared to be, a crystal dome buried in the rock floor.

In the shadows lies the keeper of the crystal.  Sword unsheathed nostrils aflare. 
One sentence?  (The second isn't really a sentence at all.)  Also, perhaps we shouldn't switch tenses?  "In the shadows lay the keeper of the crystal, sword unsheathed, nostrils aflare." [???])

Anyhoo:
The magic that had bound it to guard this place had been ancient even when its wardship had begun.
Title: Re: Let's make a story
Post by: Tybae on July 08, 2008, 03:52:19 AM
Ah crap.  I lose again.  :(
Title: Re: Let's make a story
Post by: Wyrin on July 08, 2008, 09:24:24 AM
Quote from: Estelindis on July 08, 2008, 03:06:10 AM
Quote from: Tybae on July 07, 2008, 09:57:52 PM
Quote from: QSW on July 07, 2008, 09:41:33 PM
Quote from: kookoo on July 07, 2008, 08:34:54 PM

"It began in the mountains on an overcast day, where only one ray of sunshine broke through the clouds.

It shone like the light of Heaven as it bounced off what appeared to be, a crystal dome buried in the rock floor.

In the shadows lies the keeper of the crystal.  Sword unsheathed nostrils aflare. 

The magic that had bound it to guard this place had been ancient even when its wardship had begun.

But as the light reflected off the many facets of the crystal dome down into the chamber, so long steeped in darkness, the aged guardian felt a new warmth kindle in its bones.

(hope you don't mind me chipping in! :) )
Title: Re: Let's make a story
Post by: ActorOfVeil on July 08, 2008, 09:34:47 AM
Quote from: Wyrin on July 08, 2008, 09:24:24 AM
Quote from: Estelindis on July 08, 2008, 03:06:10 AM
Quote from: Tybae on July 07, 2008, 09:57:52 PM
Quote from: QSW on July 07, 2008, 09:41:33 PM
Quote from: kookoo on July 07, 2008, 08:34:54 PM

"It began in the mountains on an overcast day, where only one ray of sunshine broke through the clouds.

It shone like the light of Heaven as it bounced off what appeared to be, a crystal dome buried in the rock floor.

In the shadows lies the keeper of the crystal.  Sword unsheathed nostrils aflare. 

The magic that had bound it to guard this place had been ancient even when its wardship had begun.

But as the light reflected off the many facets of the crystal dome down into the chamber, so long steeped in darkness, the aged guardian felt a new warmth kindle in its bones.

Now it was crystal clear for the guardian what was its meaning of life.
Title: Re: Let's make a story
Post by: Tybae on July 08, 2008, 03:06:25 PM
Quote from: Wyrin on July 08, 2008, 09:24:24 AM
(hope you don't mind me chipping in! :) )

*slaps Wyrin*

How dare you do something you're supposed to do?  ;)
Title: Re: Let's make a story
Post by: Alex Hugon on July 08, 2008, 03:41:57 PM
Quote from: ActorOfVeil on July 08, 2008, 09:34:47 AM
Quote from: Wyrin on July 08, 2008, 09:24:24 AM
Quote from: Estelindis on July 08, 2008, 03:06:10 AM
Quote from: Tybae on July 07, 2008, 09:57:52 PM
Quote from: QSW on July 07, 2008, 09:41:33 PM
Quote from: kookoo on July 07, 2008, 08:34:54 PM

"It began in the mountains on an overcast day, where only one ray of sunshine broke through the clouds.

It shone like the light of Heaven as it bounced off what appeared to be, a crystal dome buried in the rock floor.

In the shadows lies the keeper of the crystal.  Sword unsheathed nostrils aflare. 

The magic that had bound it to guard this place had been ancient even when its wardship had begun.

But as the light reflected off the many facets of the crystal dome down into the chamber, so long steeped in darkness, the aged guardian felt a new warmth kindle in its bones.

Now it was crystal clear for the guardian what was its meaning of life:

Its purpose, it now knew, was to blow up the ocean.
Title: Re: Let's make a story
Post by: kookoo on July 08, 2008, 05:44:18 PM
Quote from: Alex Hugon on July 08, 2008, 03:41:57 PM
Quote from: ActorOfVeil on July 08, 2008, 09:34:47 AM
Quote from: Wyrin on July 08, 2008, 09:24:24 AM
Quote from: Estelindis on July 08, 2008, 03:06:10 AM
Quote from: Tybae on July 07, 2008, 09:57:52 PM
Quote from: QSW on July 07, 2008, 09:41:33 PM
Quote from: kookoo on July 07, 2008, 08:34:54 PM

"It began in the mountains on an overcast day, where only one ray of sunshine broke through the clouds.

It shone like the light of Heaven as it bounced off what appeared to be, a crystal dome buried in the rock floor.

In the shadows lies the keeper of the crystal.  Sword unsheathed nostrils aflare. 

The magic that had bound it to guard this place had been ancient even when its wardship had begun.

But as the light reflected off the many facets of the crystal dome down into the chamber, so long steeped in darkness, the aged guardian felt a new warmth kindle in its bones.

Now it was crystal clear for the guardian what was its meaning of life:

Its purpose, it now knew, was to blow up the ocean.

For the ocean was salty.  .  .  and fishy.  .  .  and sharky.
Title: Re: Let's make a story
Post by: Tybae on July 08, 2008, 05:52:00 PM
Quote from: kookoo on July 08, 2008, 05:44:18 PM
Quote from: Alex Hugon on July 08, 2008, 03:41:57 PM
Quote from: ActorOfVeil on July 08, 2008, 09:34:47 AM
Quote from: Wyrin on July 08, 2008, 09:24:24 AM
Quote from: Estelindis on July 08, 2008, 03:06:10 AM
Quote from: Tybae on July 07, 2008, 09:57:52 PM
Quote from: QSW on July 07, 2008, 09:41:33 PM
Quote from: kookoo on July 07, 2008, 08:34:54 PM

"It began in the mountains on an overcast day, where only one ray of sunshine broke through the clouds.

It shone like the light of Heaven as it bounced off what appeared to be, a crystal dome buried in the rock floor.

In the shadows lies the keeper of the crystal.  Sword unsheathed nostrils aflare. 

The magic that had bound it to guard this place had been ancient even when its wardship had begun.

But as the light reflected off the many facets of the crystal dome down into the chamber, so long steeped in darkness, the aged guardian felt a new warmth kindle in its bones.

Now it was crystal clear for the guardian what was its meaning of life:

Its purpose, it now knew, was to blow up the ocean.

For the ocean was salty.  .  .  and fishy.  .  .  and sharky.

Steve Irwin's ghost lives there, stalking the denizens of the deep.  ;)
Title: Re: Let's make a story
Post by: kookoo on July 08, 2008, 06:10:19 PM
What we have so far:

"It began in the mountains on an overcast day, where only one ray of sunshine broke through the clouds.

It shone like the light of Heaven as it bounced off what appeared to be, a crystal dome buried in the rock floor.

In the shadows lies the keeper of the crystal.  Sword unsheathed nostrils aflare. 

The magic that had bound it to guard this place had been ancient even when its wardship had begun.

But as the light reflected off the many facets of the crystal dome down into the chamber, so long steeped in darkness, the aged guardian felt a new warmth kindle in its bones.

Now it was crystal clear for the guardian what was its meaning of life:

Its purpose, it now knew, was to blow up the ocean.

For the ocean was salty.  .  .  and fishy.  .  .  and sharky.

Steve Irwin's ghost lives there, stalking the denizens of the deep.  ;)

Perhaps a second paragraph?
Title: Re: Let's make a story
Post by: sirchet on July 09, 2008, 12:16:49 AM
Quote from: kookoo on July 08, 2008, 06:10:19 PM

Steve Irwin's ghost lives there, stalking the denizens of the deep.  ;)


Standing...swaying, on the sandy floor, the ghost peers towards the surface grimacing at what is to come.
Title: Re: Let's make a story
Post by: Starlight on July 09, 2008, 01:50:59 AM
Quote from: sirchet on July 09, 2008, 12:16:49 AM
Quote from: kookoo on July 08, 2008, 06:10:19 PM

Steve Irwin's ghost lives there, stalking the denizens of the deep.  ;)


Standing...swaying, on the sandy floor, the ghost peers towards the surface grimacing at what is to come.

It murmurs, "well, well, well, look at this..."  ;D
Title: Re: Let's make a story
Post by: Tybae on July 09, 2008, 02:53:51 AM
Quote from: Starlight on July 09, 2008, 01:50:59 AM
Quote from: sirchet on July 09, 2008, 12:16:49 AM
Quote from: kookoo on July 08, 2008, 06:10:19 PM

Steve Irwin's ghost lives there, stalking the denizens of the deep.  ;)


Standing...swaying, on the sandy floor, the ghost peers towards the surface grimacing at what is to come.

It murmurs, "well, well, well, look at this..."  ;D

It's the Sabartooth Tyegah Shaaaaaaak, whot a bewty!
Title: Re: Let's make a story
Post by: QSW on July 09, 2008, 05:41:53 PM
Quote"It began in the mountains on an overcast day, where only one ray of sunshine broke through the clouds.
It shone like the light of Heaven as it bounced off what appeared to be, a crystal dome buried in the rock floor.
In the shadows lies the keeper of the crystal.  Sword unsheathed nostrils aflare.
The magic that had bound it to guard this place had been ancient even when its wardship had begun.
But as the light reflected off the many facets of the crystal dome down into the chamber, so long steeped in darkness, the aged guardian felt a new warmth kindle in its bones.
Now it was crystal clear for the guardian what was its meaning of life:
Its purpose, it now knew, was to blow up the ocean.
For the ocean was salty.  .  .  and fishy.  .  .  and sharky.
Steve Irwin's ghost lives there, stalking the denizens of the deep.  Wink

Standing...swaying, on the sandy floor, the ghost peers towards the surface grimacing at what is to come.
It murmurs, "well, well, well, look at this..."  Grin
It's the Sabartooth Tyegah Shaaaaaaak, whot a bewty!

The shark opens wide its horrendous maw and spits an ancient blade from between its teeth at the ghost.
Title: Re: Let's make a story
Post by: Starlight on July 09, 2008, 06:01:22 PM
Quote from: QSW on July 09, 2008, 05:41:53 PM
Quote"It began in the mountains on an overcast day, where only one ray of sunshine broke through the clouds.
It shone like the light of Heaven as it bounced off what appeared to be, a crystal dome buried in the rock floor.
In the shadows lies the keeper of the crystal.  Sword unsheathed nostrils aflare.
The magic that had bound it to guard this place had been ancient even when its wardship had begun.
But as the light reflected off the many facets of the crystal dome down into the chamber, so long steeped in darkness, the aged guardian felt a new warmth kindle in its bones.
Now it was crystal clear for the guardian what was its meaning of life:
Its purpose, it now knew, was to blow up the ocean.
For the ocean was salty.  .  .  and fishy.  .  .  and sharky.
Steve Irwin's ghost lives there, stalking the denizens of the deep.  Wink

Standing...swaying, on the sandy floor, the ghost peers towards the surface grimacing at what is to come.
It murmurs, "well, well, well, look at this..."  Grin
It's the Sabartooth Tyegah Shaaaaaaak, whot a bewty!

The shark opens wide its horrendous maw and spits an ancient blade from between its teeth at the ghost.

Concealment 50%, attack missed.  ;D
Title: Re: Let's make a story
Post by: Wyrin on July 09, 2008, 08:07:45 PM
"Perhaps," thinks Steve Irwin's ghost, "if I can jab my thumb up it's arse, I can really piss it off"

couldn't pass up the south park reference
Title: Re: Let's make a story
Post by: Tybae on July 09, 2008, 08:57:23 PM
Quote from: Wyrin on July 09, 2008, 08:07:45 PM
"Perhaps," thinks Steve Irwin's ghost, "if I can jab my thumb up it's arse, I can really piss it off"

couldn't pass up the south park reference

Literally, ROTFLMAO

:D
Title: Re: Let's make a story
Post by: sirchet on July 09, 2008, 09:39:35 PM
Quote from: Wyrin on July 09, 2008, 08:07:45 PM
"Perhaps," thinks Steve Irwin's ghost, "if I can jab my thumb up it's arse, I can really piss it off"

The huge anal retentive shark cautiously backs away from the ghost of the beloved and sorely missed naturalist.
Title: Re: Let's make a story
Post by: QSW on July 10, 2008, 10:50:29 AM
Quote"It began in the mountains on an overcast day, where only one ray of sunshine broke through the clouds.
It shone like the light of Heaven as it bounced off what appeared to be, a crystal dome buried in the rock floor.
In the shadows lies the keeper of the crystal.  Sword unsheathed nostrils aflare.
The magic that had bound it to guard this place had been ancient even when its wardship had begun.
But as the light reflected off the many facets of the crystal dome down into the chamber, so long steeped in darkness, the aged guardian felt a new warmth kindle in its bones.
Now it was crystal clear for the guardian what was its meaning of life:
Its purpose, it now knew, was to blow up the ocean.
For the ocean was salty.  .  .  and fishy.  .  .  and sharky.
Steve Irwin's ghost lives there, stalking the denizens of the deep.  Wink

Standing...swaying, on the sandy floor, the ghost peers towards the surface grimacing at what is to come.
It murmurs, "well, well, well, look at this..."  Grin
It's the Sabartooth Tyegah Shaaaaaaak, whot a bewty!

The shark opens wide its horrendous maw and spits an ancient blade from between its teeth at the ghost.
Concealment 50%, attack missed.  Grin
"Perhaps," thinks Steve Irwin's ghost, "if I can jab my thumb up it's arse, I can really piss it off"
The huge anal retentive shark cautiously backs away from the ghost of the beloved and sorely missed naturalist.

The shark sunddenly utters a polymorph spell and turns into a mischievous water dragon, winking it swims off into the west
Title: Re: Let's make a story
Post by: Starlight on July 10, 2008, 02:04:03 PM
"What?...", still in Shock, the ghost just stand there speechless.
Title: Re: Let's make a story
Post by: Tybae on July 10, 2008, 03:03:10 PM
Quote from: Starlight on July 10, 2008, 02:04:03 PM
"What?...", still in Shock, the ghost just stand there speechless.

A large boom is heard as the Water Dragon hits the shore rocks that were to the west.